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« Reply #315 on: September 13, 2019, 07:08:05 AM »

Kim,

the line of washing is a very good idea. Maybe a somewhat yellow/red light behind the fence as a suggestion of distant sunlight might solve the problem with the shadows on the sky. Did you ever think of using the effects of background bruising (o Lord, please let google have translated that correctly)? With the new somewhat whiteish roofs the buildings look much less 'put in front of a background' than they did before. Maybe the roofs might benefit from getting paler/blueish the closer they are to the background.
The finish and coloring of the concrete looks very good. Maybe you may add some unifying tone to lower areas of the buildings, which to me at the moment are lacking a bit of entrenching to the ground.

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« Reply #316 on: September 13, 2019, 02:11:29 PM »

Hi there Volker.
cheers
Background bruising maybe you mean background brushing-close.
The background is less of a problem at the moment when iI photographed it the two wooden clad walls are very similar large expanses of blank walls. With my last version, everything was weathered quite heavily now I want to change that approach. The blue ting of on the roof is a great idea what I am after is galvanised roof sheets a very common building material here in Australia.
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« Reply #317 on: September 13, 2019, 02:19:14 PM »

I mean things/landscapes appearing more and more blueish and brighter the farer they are away.
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« Reply #318 on: September 14, 2019, 04:01:10 AM »

Goodevening.
Yes, I added a bit of blue to the roof big improvement basically a tone of the sky just enough to make it look like a different. These large plains of walls with little weathering are a great background to detail objects you know they don't compete with each other so the foreground is not overpowered by the background. I have planned at least 3 details for these areas.
 With my attached photos 2 of the roof there is one of the colour pallet used in the movie industry personally I love this attention to detail.
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« Reply #319 on: September 14, 2019, 07:30:07 AM »

The cloud now looks a bit like steam rising from the boil kettle in the back of the laundry building.
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« Reply #320 on: September 14, 2019, 01:04:17 PM »

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« Reply #321 on: September 15, 2019, 10:30:10 AM »

Hello Kim, how about a simple gradient from above a little darker and a little brighter at the bottom.
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